第一篇
If you have problems，what should you do?
It is normal ,（ usual and common） for everyone to have problems. (someone may have problems with studying，someone may have problems with relationship with parents or friends， someone may don't like himself or herself.) When you meet problems , what should you do? I have some good ways for you.
Firstly, you can talk with someone you trust ,such as your parents or teachers,(because they have more experience than you , and they are always there.They care about/love you so much that they will understand you.)
Secondly, you can write to an expert or a pen pal, they can give you some advice.(They are good listeners.)
Thirdly, you can hang out, (go to a bike riding) or go to a movie with friends. You can do some sports or listen to light music to relax.
All in all ,don't worry! Never give up!As long as you follow them , you will solve the problems.
提醒：括号里的可以不要，人称代词可以用we
第二篇
If I have a lot of money，I will.....
If I have a lot of money,I will have many things to do. Let me tell you !
If I have a lot of money,I will buy many clothes, books and food to the poor kids. （Books can open their eyes.） If I have a lot of money, I will give it to the old people's homes,（ they're lonely, so we should care about them. ) If I have a lot of money, I will take my parents to travel around the world，(they arehard-working，so I will look after them well.)
All in all ,if I have a lot of money, I will give it to the people who need it ，(if everyone gives a little love ,the world will be more beautiful!)
优点：采用三段式，结构清晰，开头和结尾点题；有层次，有的以时间顺序来写，比如“in the morning，…. in the afternoon，…”有的用顺序词，比如“First，….Second，…”；还有的用名言警句；有的句式丰富，如：It's adj for sb to do sth.