1号作品
点评：576班 曾洁琪 （北京）
Your Mapo Tofu poster offers a vivid portrayal of the dish, complemented by cute hand-drawn illustrations that effectively convey its fragrance and freshness. To elevate it, focus on refining the formatting to enhance readability and ensure a more coherent flow of information. Your passion for food shines through – keep up the great work!
2号作品
点评：576班 廖曦 （长沙）
This poster provides a detailed introduction to the practices of Lotus Crisp and Siye Crisp, two traditional snacks. The description is concise，and the illustrations are very vivid, showcasing the materials and appearance characteristics of these two snacks. There is a small mistake in the title, but the defects cannot obscure the virtues. Overall, this is a very thoughtful poster that combines knowledge and aesthetics.
3号作品
点评： 659班 伍杰文（上海）
This poster, combined with pictures, vividly displays the production process of Xiangdong Street beef noodle. Firstly，pictures reflects the life scene on Xiangdong Street.Moreover, the content explains the process of making a bowl of beef noodles step by step, which is specific and detailed. However, there are some issues such as grammar errors, lengthy sentences, and inadequate use of conjunctions in the content that can be further improved. Apart from those drawbacks, it is still a good work.
点评：576班 李丽菲 （新化）
The overall picture and text are abundant,and the layout is reasonable and beautiful!
The text part introduces the specific steps of making Xiangdong Street beef noodles, and the picture part vividly reflects the food flavour of Xiangdong Street, people's life atmosphere and overall style.
Generally speaking, it is a very exquisite poster designed around local Chinese cuisine.
4号作品
点评：731班 龚惠萍 （贵阳）
The drawing shows the basic ingredients of luosifen, which is refreshing. The different ingredients have their own descriptions and are very creative.
5号作品
点评：714班 刘悫颖 （北京）
Except for a few spelling and writing mistakes, this is a wonderful piece of writing for its vivid and detailed descriptions and skillful combination with emotions which touches my heart. I really appreciate this post if most of it was done by yourselves.
6号作品
点评：591班 李芬（北京）
The content, layout and details of the poster are excellent, and it can be seen that the designers have put great effort into it. However, it is better to use a unified term for "北京烤鸭" throughout the poster ——"Beijing duck" or "Beijing roast duck". In addition, “便宜坊（biàn yí fāng）”should be called "Bianyifang" instead of "Cheap Fang".
点评：591班 刘佳慧 （武汉）
The poster mainly introduces the history and the cooking procedures of Beijing Duck. Some foreign friends asked me what’s my favorite Chinese food and I said “Beijing Duck” without hesitation. So I am happy learning so much background knowledge about my favorite food. But I think it would be even better if the information (especially in the root part) can be simplified a little bit and concluded by couple summary sentences.
7号作品
点评：644班 奉琛宇 （厦门）
From this poster, I can see the creativity, talent and collaboration of the creators. The color scheme and layout of this poster are just right. Coincidentally, it happen to be one of my favorite foods.In a word, this poster is clear and well done.
8号作品
点评：714班 蔡心雨 （杭州）
The poster is beautifully illustrated, the hand-drawn picture is also very lovely, closely related to the theme, the text content is relatively comprehensive, but the handwriting can be improved.Moreover, the number of words in a paragraph is relatively large, and it is suggested that it is divided into more parts to write, which will be more beautiful.
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