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篇一：
【写作要求】
天下最伟大的爱就是母爱。假设你是李静，母亲节就要到了，你们班将举办以What will you do for Mum?为题的英语演讲比赛。请你准备一篇80词左右的演讲稿参加比赛。
【优秀作文】
What will you do for Mum?
八年级博识班 张紫涵
Hello, class. I’m Li Jing. Mother’s Day is coming. I’m going to do something for my mum on that day. My mum likes flowers, so I’ll buy some beautiful ones for her. I’ll cook a delicious dinner after school. Our family will get together and have dinner happily. Also, I’ll send my mum a card and say “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. I love my mum very much and I’ll study hard to make her proud of me one day.Thanks for your attention.
Teacher commenting:
You ' ve done a good job .I ' m sure you can do your work better next time .
篇二：
【写作要求】
亲爱的同学们，课余时间、周末、假期，你们通常都是怎样度过的呢？请以 “My Free Time” 为题，写一篇短文。信息提示：
1. 参加运动，强身健体；
2. 娱乐活动，放松心情；
3. 做家务，帮助父母；
4. 课外阅读，开拓视野。
【优秀作文】
My Free Time
八年级博识班 景莹
I have lots of things to do in my free time.
Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends too. When I get tired, I would like to sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel, a science fiction, or even a poem. Reading calms my heart down and satisfies my hunger for knowledge.
I love my free time because I enjoy the freedom.
Teacher commenting:
The harder you work , the sooner you will improve .Come on ! l am sure you will catch up soon .
篇三：
【写作要求】
当今社会，与人交往越来越成为一种不可或缺的能力，作为中学生，学会如何与人相处尤为重要。假如上周你们班对 “如何与人相处” 展开了讨论，请根据以下的讨论结果，以“How to get on well with others?” 为题，写一篇英语短文。
讨论结果：
（1）尊重（respect）他人
（2）学会沟通
（3）乐于助人
【优秀作文】
How to get on well with others
八年级博识班 田成
As we all know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways?
First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy.
Teacher commenting:
Excellent . You haven ' t made any mistakes . but do try to make your handwriting neater .
篇四：
【写作要求】
近年来我国的发展世人瞩目，中国的传统文化正越来越受到各国朋友的关注。请根据提示，以 “The Spring Festival” 为题写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍我国的春节。
要求如下：
1、字迹工整，规范；
2、 80词左右。
【优秀作文】
The Spring Festival
八年级博识班 贺钰涵
In China, the Spring festival is the first day of the lunar year. People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes. They prepare delicious food, and clean and decorate their homes. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, the family all get together for a big dinner. They stay up till midnight, and then play fireworks and crackers for good luck. On the first day of the lunar New Year, children put on their new clothes and greet their parents. They are very happy to get lucky money from them.
Teacher commenting:
The structure of the composition is good . but try to make sure the word order in your sentences is correct .
篇五：
【写作要求】
三年的初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，一定会思绪万千。三年来，你在学习、生活等方面取得了优异的成绩，这些成绩的背后有老师的辛勤教诲、家长的次次鼓励，还有……现在想来你很感谢他们。请以 “Thank you, my...” 为题写一篇英语短文。
要求如下：
1. 短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
3. 词数80左右。
【优秀作文】
Thank you, My English teacher
八年级博识班 杨靖妍
I should say “thank you” to my English teacher.
He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help.I think he is the best in my mind.
I will remember him forever.
Teacher commenting:
Don ' t lose heart . I am ready to help you .I ' m sure you can do your work better next time .
供稿：英语教研组
摄影：马海鹏
审核：罗龙宏
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