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篇一：
【写作要求】
假设你叫李华，你们市将要举行以 “How to Eat in a Healthy Way” 为题的演讲比赛，请你准备写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 说明此次演讲的主题 (how to eat in a healthy way)；
2. 我们应该少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些，并说明原因；
3. 描述自己的健康饮食习惯，并举例说明；
4. 希望大家都有个好的饮食习惯。
【优秀作文】
How to Eat in a Healthy Way
八年级翱翔班 衡佳音
Hello, everybody. I'm Li Hua.Today my topic is how to eat in a healthy way.
Firstly, we should never eat fried food or foods with lots of sugar because they are not good for health. Secondly, try to eat more vegetables and fruit. Because they can make us become much healthier. My eating habits are good. For example, I often eat healthy foods, like wholemeal bread, eggs, vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner.I hope everyone can eat in a healthy way.
Teacher commenting:
good food,good healthy,this is a good title.excellent! No pains , no gains . I hope you will make more progress in the future .
篇二：
写作要求】
作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把，一是字母，二是数字，三是音符。”从这句话中，我们足可见音乐对人的发展的影响。请你根据以下提示，以Music为题，写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。
提示：
1. 音乐使人充满活力，让人快乐；
2. 没有音乐，生活就没有乐趣；
3. 你最喜欢的音乐是……
4. 你不能忍受的音乐是……
【优秀作文】
Music
八年级博识班 杨小娟
I like music very much. It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. Music is very important in our life. If there is no music, our life won’t be so interesting. Different people like different kinds of music. I like electronic music that’s loud. It makes me excited. I also like music that I can dance to. The Cool Kids is my favorite band. I can’t stand music that is quiet and slow. It makes me sleepy.
Teacher commenting：
It ' s nice of you to write this way . Wonderful ! Your English is very good and your answers are correct .
【写作要求】
为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以 “How to behave well?”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。要点如下：
1. 学生应该守时、守信、不撒谎、不说脏话；
2. 礼貌待人，热心助人；
3. 遵守交通规则；不在公共场所喧哗；不乱扔垃圾；
4. 请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。
【优秀作文】
How to behave well
八年级翱翔班 卜思雨
Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.
As a student, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. We’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.
Finally, learn to work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.
Teacher commenting:
Your work has improved .I am sure there is nothing too difficult for us to learn . You have done your work better this time . l believe that nothing is impossible as long as you work hard .
【写作要求】
请根据以下提示信息以My favourite movie star为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，可适当发挥。
提示信息：
☆ Who is your favourite movie star?
☆ What does he or she look like?
☆ What do you think is his or her best movie?
☆ Why do you like him or her?
【优秀作文】
My favourite movie star
八年级翱翔班 计晓云
My favourite movie star is Jackie Chan. He has won many prizes. He is famous not only in China, but also in other countries.
Jackie Chan is not very tall. He has black hair and a big nose. His eyes are not big, but bright. He always smiles, especially after he beats bad men. Most of his movies are exciting. I think his best movie is Police Story. He often gives money to help poor people, so I like him very much.
Teacher commenting:
It ' s nice of you to write this way .Practice makes perfect .
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