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七年级
It's important to have breakfast
187班 白诗涵
We must have breakfast because it's important to our health.But what's for breakfast?First,we can have some fruit and drink some milk.They are healthy.Second,we can have some noodles.They are healthy and full.Third,We can have eggs and drink soybean milk……Of course,We don't have a lot of hamburgers,sandwich and pizza……They are bad for our bodies.
So we should have healthy breakfast and eat breakfast on time.
评语： 小作文语言优美，行文简洁，把早餐的重要性写得淋漓尽致，加油！
It is important to have breakfast
187 张峻豪
Having breakfast is important . Eating healthy breakfast can make our health better. We can eat some vegetables and fruit.They are good for our health.Drinking milk is also a great choose. They can help us keep healthy and make us strong. So let's have breakfast every day!
评语：健康生活从早餐开始。简洁凝练的语言让人感觉非常舒适，多多练习，越来越好！
It's important to have breakfast
188班 田亦娴
As is known to all , breakfast is the most important meal of the day. There are three good reasons.
First of all , eating breakfast gives us a good spirit to have a good day .
Second , breakfast is healthy for people ,it gives healthy things for our bodies .
Last but not least , having breakfast makes our life full and interesting .
All in all , breakfast is very important for us .
评语：行文自然流畅、语言逻辑性强。加油，你会越来越棒！
It's important to have breakfast
188班 张杨楠
Breakfast is important. Let me tell you why.
Having breakfast can make us have energy to study or play sports in the morning.If we don't eat breakfast,we will be hungry to listen to the teacher. If we don't eat breakfast for a long time, we can get sick easily.
I think breakfast is important to us. We should have breakfast to keep healthy.
评语：美好生活从早餐开始。小作文语言逻辑性强，流畅简洁，不失为一篇佳作。
It's important to have breakfast
188 郭雯宇
I think eating breakfast is very important.Because eating breakfast can make us healthy.In the morning,we can eat eggs,bread and drink milk. They are good for our health. But some office workers or students often hurry to have breakfast .So they don't have time to sit down and enjoy breakfast. They are not healthy.
Breakfast is very important. We must have healthy breakfast.
评语：小作文语言凝练，简洁明快，读来娓娓动听。多背多写，你会越来越优秀！加油！
八年级
Happy new year
Class:185 Name:Shang kai lun
Spring Festival is the most important festival in china.It’s to celebrate the lunar calendar’s new year.In the evening before the Spring Festival families get together and have a big meal.
We can eat dumplings.It is very good for us to eat dumplings.Children like the Spring Festival very much.because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from they family.Do you like the Spring Festival. Please tell me something about your Spring Festival.
教师评语：作文语言流畅，表达清晰，文字优美，内容扎实，语篇顺畅。本篇文章通过吃饺子，穿新衣，得红包等活动展现春节。
Spring Festival
Class:185 Name:Guo KunYu
Spring Festival is the most important festival in china. It is also my favorite festival.That day ,families get together and have a big dinner. We often eat dumplings, because dumplings are the most traditional food, Children like the festival very much, because they can have delicious food and wear their new clothes, And they can get many money from their parents and grandparents. The money can give to children for good luck.
In Spring Festival , I often paste couplets with my father.I usually do a big cleaning with my family.We will also watch the Spring Festival Gala together on that day. All in all, I like Spring Festival best.
教师评语：语句通顺，句意流畅，言辞优美，叙写形象生动鲜明，语言表达能力较强。这篇文章通过讲述春节活动和自己的亲身经历展现独特的春节文化。
The Spring Festival
Class:185 Name:Wang JieYa
The Spring Festivalisthe most important festival for all of us. On the first early morning of new year, many people get up early, and say "Happy new years day!" Then they stick the reversed Fu or hang some couplets on the front door.
During the Spring Festival, we always visit ourrelatives from door to door. At that time, children are the happiest because they can get many red packets form their parents, grandparents, uncles, aunts and so on.People enjoy the Spring Festival, during this time they can have a good rest.
教师评语：作文充满想象力，让人眼前一亮。在表达主题方面，视角独特，富有创意。结合自己亲身经历，从春节红包的独特视角切入，展现春节期间的独特活动。
New Year's resolutions
Class:186 Name:Song ZhangTing
Last week,our school did a survey among 100 students about their New Year's resolutions.Here are the results. All the students are going to work harder in school.Seventy-five percent of students are going to exercise more to keep healthy.Forteen percent of students are going to take up a new hobby.But none of the students are going to watch more TV.
As for me,I'm going to work harder in school and get good grades.During my winter vacation,I'm going to take up a new hobby，such as play football . I will work harder and try my best to make them come ture. What's your new year's resolution?Can you tell me? Please work harder and make them come true.
评语：语言简练，言之有序，篇幅短小精悍，值得一读。
New Year's resolutions
Class:186 Name:Wang Yuqian
Last week,our school did a survey among 100 students about their New Year's resolutions.Here are the results.All students plan to work harder in school because they want to get a better grade.There are seventy-five percent of the students plan to exercise more to keep their healthy and thirteen percent of them plan to take up a new hobby,such as swimming,dancing,singing or playing the piano.Nobody plan to watch more TV because it's not good for their eyes.
As for me,I have two New Year's resolutions.First,I will eat more vegetables to keep my body healthy.Another one is take up a new hobby.I will take up playing the piano.I think it's really interesting.That's all.What's your New Year's resolutions?Can you tell me？
评语：一分耕耘 一分收获，希望你在英语学习上取得更好的成绩。
New Year’s resolutions
Class:186. Name:Sun Yige
Last week,our school did a survey among 100 students about their New Year’s resolutions.Here are the results.100 percent of students wish they could work harder at school,75 percent of students want to exercise more to keep healthy.And 14 percent of students plan to take up a new hobby.But none of the students are going to watch more TV.
As for me. My first resolution is about improving my relationships with my family . I will spend more time with my parents and help them with housework . I will also remember their birthdays and listen to them more . The second one has to do with physical health . I will take up the habit of getting up early and going to bed early . I will get lots of exercise to keep fit . The third one is about how to do better at school . I ' m going to make a weekly plan for my schoolwork and listen to teachers carefully in class . Where there is a will , there is a way . I believe I will make my resolutions come true if I try my best .
评语：语句通顺，句意流畅，用词高级，希望你继续努力，保持下去，只有坚持下去，你的英语成绩才会逐渐提高。